Show Don't Tell - Presentation

WALT: Use imagery to add depth to our writing


Task Description: In this task, I have done a little more indepth of show don't tell. This is another imagery of it.

Information Report #2: Literacy

                                               Information Report Plan

Topic of Information Report: South Korea, a little report for those who don’t know much about it.

Title: South Korea

South Korea is a country found east of the continent Asia.

Language: Korean (Hanguk)

Population: 51.34 Million

Music

South Korea’s music is well known worldwide. This music genre is K-Pop. K-pop is a considered worldwide genre that became big in the 90’s to the 2000’s. Along with K-pop it was well known for it’s love of R&B, Hip-Hop, and also Reggae.

Key facts and information to include:

K-pop had suffered a lot of criticising.

In 2012 Gangnam Style (A song from PSY) had become it’s well known song.

Because K pop became popular worldwide people around the world started learning more about K culture

Food

Topic Sentence: Food is very important in South Korea. From it’s most popular foods like Kimchi (A spicy cabbage dish), Bibimbap (A rice dish with various seasoned vegetables), and also Japchae (A kind of Stir Fry with noodles). It had also been well known for it’s amazing street food markets.

Key facts and information to include:

Hotteok (A sweet Pancake) is their popular street food aside with Tteokbokki (Spicy Rice Cakes)

Seoul

Topic Sentence: Seoul is the capital of South Korea. This capital is very popular and has had a amazing number of 13.5 million foreign tourists that visit each year!

Key facts and information to include:

It’s well known torist place is Gyeonbokgung. A palace in Seoul.

The N Seoul Tower had been well known for giving a good glance at Seouls greatest views too.

Bibliography:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K-pop     https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seoul

Information Report: Literacy

New Zealand is a country found on the north, east side of australasia. It’s native languages are, english, sign language, and also maori. It’s population also consists of 4.7 million.

Wildlife

It’s wildlife is amazing! They have a native bird called the kiwi, that now said to be endangered due to many hunters, hunting them for feathers and also food. They also had a extinct bird called the moa, which can be found as a sculpture in the museum of Auckland and many others.

Key Facts and Information:

The spotted kiwi became extinct in 1930
Moa became extinct in 1300 AD

Food

New Zealand is proudfully engaged in food. The people have a lot of love for their seafood, like mussels, kina, and fish. They also have a well known dish called boil up, which consists of cabbage, meat, kumara, pumpkin, and all sorts. All these multi-cultural dishes are loved.

Key Facts and Information:

Alot of boil up dishes have a variety of different tastes and looks.
Seafood boil up is also a consistent dish of New Zealand people.
History

It’s history story is fascinating! The story of Te Tiriti O Waitangi (Formally known as The Treaty Of Waitangi) is the country’s popular story sharing the fact of a peace signing of the europeans and the maori. The treaty was said to be signed in 1840, both having a english version and a maori version.
Key Facts and Information:
 1845 - 1872 the Maori fought the world war.

Conclusion
Overall, New Zealand is a great place. From it’s wonderful people, Food, and heaps others.

Show Don't Tell - Literacy Work

Show Don’t Tell

It was terrifying. The loud gunshots blew my mind as many bodies suffered to the ground, crimson red blood gushing from their wounds.

I myself was impaired. There were alot of gun wounds around my hips. This wasn’t what I signed up for at all. A loud crash echoes through my suffering ears, another person shot.

Guilt raided through my body, I felt sorry for these people. I remember a soldier telling me last night about his kid who sent him about more than 100 letters saying he missed him. My eyes dissolve into tears, I weeped but the only thing heard were gunshots, they muted my disfigured cries for help.

That’s when my cries had been done for. My ears rang. My breath hitched. Was this the end? My body lay there lifeless. The only last thing I had saw was a poppy. It was very appealing. As I took my last breath, I mumbled “ Lest we forget. “


Task Description: In this writing task, we had been learning to show not tell. Show not tell is another way of saying having more detail. We had to put more detail into a message, letter, or something involved with the war. Here is my story.

What is a information report?

Today, we had learnt what is so important about information reports. We had to use our information and put them onto cards.

The cards represent information we know about information reports. Then after we structured them together, putting relatable contents together.

A information report is a article that shares infomation about a certain topic or story (Particularly from the news. )

Sometimes a information report is boring. This informs for you to find something your interested in. ( Eg. Animals, Pop-Stars, News Updates )