Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Pt England describing a setting

I see fluffy clouds floating in the air and I see a really bright sunshine. I smell the fresh air flowing around the place and I taste the little raindrops falling into my mouth. Pt England is not an ecosanctuary place this means that there are predators in this place. This is a beautiful environment.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Chance, Ryan here from Awahono School. Your writing paints a good picture in your mind of what you are doing. Next time you should make your writing longer. From Ryan.